STORY BREAKER DEVELOPMENT PACKAGE
Are you writing the best possible version of your movie or TV show?
Avoid spending months toiling away on a story with suboptimal structure and characters. Bring Dominic in to your writers room. The game plan:
Eight 60 minute story development calls.
Granular analysis of your outline / treatment (maximum 20 pages).
Stress test your scene plan and structure
Identify character journeys
Optimise your premise
Identify story problems and spitball solutions
Story premise & logline analysis
Dominic has been breaking stories for two decades for producers and as part of a writing partnership. He loves collaborating with writers and other filmmakers to generate ideas which they can then use in their scripts.
For every problem he identifies in your script, he will work with you to come up with an actionable solution, which you can then riff off and fully develop in your draft.
STORY BREAKER - £4000
Outline Analysis & 8 Story Development Video Calls
Dominic will analyse your outline within 7 working days and contact you to book two story development calls, barring scheduling conflicts. In the event he is unable to read your outline within the 7-day timeframe, he will notify you within 24 hours of purchase to offer an alternative delivery date or a full refund.
24-48 hour turnaround available with a £150 rush fee. Please email dom@scriptfella.com to arrange.
LEARN TO EDIT YOUR OWN SCRIPTS IN 30 DAYS
You have a choice: hire Dominic to help you edit & optimise ONE of your scripts for industry readers OR...
Learn how to do it yourself and apply that newfound knowledge to ALL of your screenplays, past, future & present.
In 30 days, Dominic will teach you advanced screenwriting and editing techniques that took him 20 years to master.
— TODD ROBINSON - SCREENWRITER