AUDIO NOTES ON EVERY LINE OF YOUR SCRIPT

Breaking into Hollywood and making a name for yourself is never easy - but it is nigh-on impossible if reading your script is like wading through treacle.

Make every word count.

Every paragraph, every sentence, every word needs to earn its place and deliver maximum enjoyment for the Hollywood reader (agents, managers, producers).

Dominic will hunt down and destroy every clunky, overwritten line of scene description and dialogue in your script, which can kill off the reader’s enjoyment and your chances of breaking into the film and television industry.

In addition to helping you eliminate any suboptimal writing, Dominic will provide you with concrete suggestions to improve your visual storytelling and help you craft an effortlessly-enjoyable read for the Hollywood gatekeeper.

If you can give the reader a “good night in,” it will exponentially boost the chances of execs and agents sharing your script around Hollywood - and you landing paid writing assignments.

 
 

LINE BY LINE

  • Commentary on every scene and story beat

  • Character development & story structure

  • “Ballpark” plot suggestions and scene ideas

  • Line-by-line scene description edits

  • Line-by-line dialogue edits

  • Scene description suggestions and fixes

  • Dialogue suggestions and fixes

  • Cinematic “show don’t tell” suggestions & fixes

  • Page design and reader optimization suggestions and fixes

  • Story premise & logline analysis

 

LINE BY LINE FULL SCRIPT EDIT - AUDIO NOTES

TV PILOT £1300 | FEATURE £2000

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Dominic will deliver your audio notes within 7-14 working days, barring scheduling conflicts. In the event he is unable to meet the 14-day timeframe, he will notify you within 24 hours of purchase to offer an alternative delivery date or a full refund.

24-48 hour turnaround available with a £150 rush fee. Please email dom@scriptfella.com to arrange.

LEARN TO EDIT YOUR OWN SCRIPTS IN 30 DAYS

You have a choice: hire Dominic to help you edit & optimise ONE of your scripts for industry readers OR...

Learn how to do it yourself and apply that newfound knowledge to ALL of your screenplays, past, future & present.

In 30 days, Dominic will teach you advanced screenwriting and editing techniques that took him 20 years to master.

 
 
 
 
 

— CHRISTOPHER BURGART - SCREENWRITER

 
 

HAVE A QUESTION?

E-mail Dominic at dom@scriptfella.com