Dominic provides you with audio notes, real-time feedback showing you how your script will be received by the Hollywood reader - agents, managers, development execs and producers.
WHAT ARE AUDIO SCRIPT NOTES?
Watch the video below which includes the actual audio notes Dominic gave to client Christopher Burgart on his spec script.
Christopher felt his career had hit a plateau and asked Dominic to help him boost his 6/10 Black List scores and launch his career.
After actioning the audio notes, Christopher went on to score 9/10 on the Black List, won two screenwriting contests and the attention of Mark Wahlberg’s management company.
Audio Script Notes
SCENE BY SCENE
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Are your characters and scenes pulling their weight?
Dominic will analyse every scene in your screenplay and provide you with actionable ideas to ramp up the drama and optimize your story premise, plot structure and characters.
TV PILOT £450 | FEATURE £650
THE FIRST TEN
Are you hooking the reader from page one?
Dominic will analyse every scene, description and line of dialogue in your first ten pages, giving you a “reader-first” guide on how to deliver a professionally-written, page-turning opener going forward.
FIRST TEN PAGES / LOGLINE ANALYSIS £295
LINE BY LINE
Get your script into the best possible shape before you submit it to Hollywood readers.
Dominic will deliver a line-by-line script edit and help you hone a professionally-written, page-turning script to Hollywood agents, managers and producers.
TV PILOT £1300 | FEATURE £2000
LEARN TO EDIT YOUR OWN SCRIPTS IN 30 DAYS
THE SCRIPTFELLA PROGRAM
You have a choice: hire Dominic to help you edit & optimise ONE of your scripts for industry readers OR...
Learn how to do it yourself and apply that newfound knowledge to ALL of your screenplays, past, future & present.
In 30 days, Dominic will teach you advanced screenwriting and editing techniques that took him 20 years to master.
The Scriptfella Program includes:
12 hours of intensive on-demand video training
3-year course access
8 assignments
Every lesson includes actionable steps to improve your writing
Exclusive access to the alumni group to connect with other writers and directors
Get The Program for £475 | Payment Plan available £275 x 2
CAREER COACHING CALLS
CAREER COACHING
Prep for general and pitch meetings. Develop your screenwriting brand. Nail down a strategy to break into Hollywood.
1-HOUR ZOOM CONSULT £210
THE STORY BREAKER
Avoid spending months toiling on a project that won’t sell. Dominic will help you structure your story for success.
THE STORY BREAKER CONSULT £4000
What Do My Clients Say?
—ADAM D'ALBA - SCREENWRITER